genetically modified trees
Both of the passage and lecture are talking about genetically modified and natural trees and compare them.genetic modification is a way used to change organism gens and used to improve trees they give more fruit and grow faster and like that.
At first in the passage refers to the fact that genetically modified trees are hardier deign than natural trees and they design for survive in difficult conditions like difficult weater condition and incidence of viruses and …,but professor rejects this theory and she believes noun modified trees can survives are more resistant and genetically modified trees can survives in specific condition and out of it,they all die.
Secoundlly,passage to express modified plants have many benefits for economic and farmers,because
They grow faster and give greater yields but professor believes that,this way have hidden costs for farmers,they cant collect seeds and use it again they get forced pay for compony.
Finally,use of modified trees can protect wild trees from extinction because they can grow faster for humans needs like firewood,building timber,… on the other hand lecture reject this opinion and believes that,modified trees grow more aggressively and compte with other species for resours like sun,water and food and it can be harmful for rare plants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 7.30242825607 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 205.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40487804878 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86233826946 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580487804878 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 21.2450331126 240% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2188543057 49.2860985944 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 277.0 110.228320801 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.25 21.698381199 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.25 7.06452816374 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398565768855 0.272083759551 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.263672237353 0.0996497079465 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149955144656 0.0662205650399 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221207785577 0.162205337803 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161504696701 0.0443174109184 364% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.6 13.3589403974 222% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 53.8541721854 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.0289183223 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 12.2367328918 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.42419426049 121% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.7273730684 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.498013245 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.2008830022 268% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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