Many offenders commit more crime after serving punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Majority of criminals after completing their punishment perform more crimes. There are several reasons behind such occurrences and some preventive steps can be taken to tackle this situation. Both causes and are analysed in the ensuing paragraphs.
Out of all the reasons, the prominent one is a lack of money. In addition, when criminals come out of the jail, they do no have enough money to live their life or to establish any small business. So, they commit crime to fulfil the need of money. Moreover, atmosphere in the jail is highly stressful and living with other criminals affect their mindset. As a result, after completing their punishment they misuse their freedom by committing more crimes.
However, there are several precautionary steps that can be taken. The first and foremost solution is to provide them education. By providing education of moral values and social ethics can help to teach them social lifestyle. Additionally, atmosphere in jail is very disturbing and criminals go through torturing on daily basis; so, jails should stop such kind of activities. Along with this, some strict steps, such as conditional freedom can help to alleviate crime because offender may get afraid due to fear. Furthermore, government should help them by providing some small jobs to fulfil their need of money. For instance, garbage collector, street cleaner and peons.
To conclude, it can be stated that rise in crimes after completing the punishment is due to the lack of money and stressful atmosphere of the jail but government should take some necessary steps such as by educating them in jails, providing small jobs, and by giving conditional freedom. I think this debate should be taken on serious note.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, i think, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13523131673 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68831473823 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555160142349 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.0634835419 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8823529412 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21229002295 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696526792744 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752264583415 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150519243025 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630102768213 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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