Most people accept that we now live in a globalized world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development?
World has become a global village where it is easy to move across and in any part of the world. Majority of the people perceive that we are a part of this change but few individuals believe that the globalization has not any fruitful outcomes. I believe that to a major extent this change has merits over its demerits. My inclination is justified further in ensuing paragraphs.
The first and foremost advantage is that the world is becoming a global market for various businesses. To add to this point, trading has became easy and any commodity of any nation is now available in distant part of the world. For instance, toys made in China, cars made by Germans are now available in any nation in any location of the world. Moreover, relations among the nations have developed and this has lead to reduction in international tension and peaceful environment in the globe. Likewise, tourism industry has increased because of international travelling has become much more easier and cultural similarity has welcomed many foreigners in various nations.
Along with this, this change has improved life style of people. Local businesses and industries are getting international market to trade in and launch their products; hence in general opportunities and visions is becoming wider. Likewise, competition has increased among foreign vendors and local vendors, resulting in lowering the inflation rate and dictatorship of single firm. furthermore, Cultural diversity is producing different skills to learn and absorb. For instance, western culture has influenced Indian music such that many rap singers are coming and taking their steps in this field.
However, I would not overlook its darker side that it diminish local colure; thus, cultural gap keep on increasing because older generation are not able to adapt the globalization. Sometimes in many countries unemployment rate is increasing because employers are getting wider option availability to choose from. Also, drugs are spreading across the world because of smuggling has became easy.
To conclude, I pen down saying this transition is definitely producing more benefits on personal and global basis. Businesses are expanding and individuals are getting better lifestyle and opportunities to explore. However, this transition has produced threats over local culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, look, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40547945205 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86799200134 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545205479452 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2678145321 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.65 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17386990576 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515167208733 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541730488825 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937147179168 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659552155297 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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