Successful sport professional can earn a great deal more money than people in other professions. Some people think this is fully justified while other think it is unfair.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, it is general truth that professional athlete paid with high salary different with employees who obtaining money depend on ability and working hours. While some people argue that it is immoderate paying, I believe that sportsman paid in expensive suitable with awful risk of to take.
There are various considerations why employer decide that employment have to pay based on capabilities and their working hours, even though their working full-time and lots of overtime. Moreover, a profession job that people do has small risk, a monotonous job and it sometimes casual work that not be taking full power and physically exercise. For example, like a manager in a big company who working relate to their job desk, 8 hours in a day and earn salary based on agreement with the company in the beginning of time. That is why a profession job cannot be expected earn more money than its skill and working hours.
On the other hand, special athlete paid an expensive because of there is high risk of their actions that could endanger body physically and even their lives, this is requiring high skill and safety in tight. If a small mistake, It could be affected to injury permanently and recovery to an accident will spend much money. For instance, a rider of motor GP, if gain injury will stop their action in several tournaments and it will waste much time to recovery, of course spending much money too. So obtaining high salary is also balancing with an awful risk of to take for a professional sportsman.
In conclusion, I argue that a professional possessing a high level of skill and risk deserves to earn heavy paycheck, even if it is hard for some to admit it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81034482759 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63437669041 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531034482759 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.864582049 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.818181818 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108310922961 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469418265621 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366094547169 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675518164024 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130723952851 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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