In some countries young people are not only richer, but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are often less happy. What do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to help?
In general opinion, wealthy people in many developed countries that tended to associated with level of happiness and satisfaction. Actually, there are some problems why rich people cannot be happy that writer will explain in this essay and show a few of solutions where relevant.
There are some matters that lead a number of wealthy people cannot enjoy happiness in their live, even all of things have stayed beside them. Firstly, competitive behavior has made gap among rich people, where they are feeling disappointed when working to collect much money cannot be surpassing others people. For instance, a parent who gets feeling less responsibility because that cannot fulfill a level of well-being for their family over than neighbor. Secondly, wealthy men are working in all the time, as a result, because of high responsibility in the office so they do not have a time to enjoy the life. Finally, hard-working to collect much money by ignoring leisure time with family is the part of issue that affected to the happiness goes away.
on the other side, I believe that time management like spending part of our free time with family is the one of solution to discuss the happiness issue, where people can do everything with family, enjoying the quality time together like dinner in outside, sharing and keep in touch each other. Furthermore, trying to open interaction with other people is also the good way to made relation and showing that we are the part of the society.
In conclusion, I argue that enjoying leisure time with family and making good relation with other are the best way to handle the issue about less happy to the wealthy people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...affected to the happiness goes away. on the other side, I believe that time man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93928571429 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53827586912 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546428571429 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.6798612352 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.3 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141796961877 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622170628603 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298553333999 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886626146548 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384795887639 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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