Some employer think their plumber academic qualification are more important than life experience and personal skill when they look for an employer why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, the educated people's ratio is far large than uneducated peoples. Few employers believe that a university degree is more valuable than life experience and personal qualities. This essay will explain why this phenomenon is creating a positive impact. It is described in the following paragraphs.
There are plenty of reasons, which push me to think this statement is beneficial for society. First and foremost, the salary rate is high for an educated employer because educated employers can handle situations very smoothly, which is a plus point for a company. And the salary amount attracts people. They think a degree is more important to them. For example, all employers went the government jobs because that empower enough money, therefore they earn a degree or certificate.
On the same hand, if any employers have a degree that indicates persons have reasonable knowledge about their field. But, personal quality can not define that person can do any work accurately. Academic qualification is the symbol of information of related field, which will help to develop any industries or factories. For example, big companies such as Tesla, Apple, and many more are hire educated employers who will help their companies to develop in the upcoming years.
To conclude, personal skill and quality is important but not as much as education. Employers who have a degree can control the situation decently. The salary of that employer is high, which attracts other people to focus more on education. All in all, a degree has more value rather than personal skills or experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
Nowadays, the educated peoples ratio is far large than uneducated peop...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...egree or certificate. On the same hand, if any employers have a degree that indi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1953125 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72605878227 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57421875 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4949633914 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2352941176 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35223036159 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994132014381 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063502759917 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198767103539 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102760510505 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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