It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Do you agree?
It is claimed that keeping friendship is more valuable than making new acquaintances, and it is assumed that people you have been in relationships with for some time are more reliable and closer to relatives. Although keeping "a good climate" in established connections is highly valuable, I dare say that networking with unknown people is equally important.
Undoubtedly, staying in touch with old friends is of great value. Already established connections are much more reliable in challenging situations because their behavior is usually much easier to predict. To be specific, doing business with childhood friends is quicker than with strangers due to a lack of trust between and among partners. However, old friendships are not guaranteed, and the “wind of change” may come when your friend-partner may betray you and leave the firm.
Nonetheless, people's interests usually dramatically change through life and may move far from those of friends. At that time, people make new connections and develop their relationships with other people. Indeed, this concept may happen in every aspect of life, beginning from work and continuing to sports or hobbies. Since 2020 a friend of mine has been doing triathlon, making several new connections with other sportsmen from the running club where he has been training so far. While their friendship has been expanding, they have created several business projects conjugated with sports and made much money. Could he imagine that doing sports would dramatically change his life in aspects of life other than physical form and begin a new chapter in his life?
Equally important, new connections may foster career development in a business environment. For example, my neighbour Boris got stuck with a generation of ideas at a work project and asked his more experienced colleague for help. He then discovered that his colleague usually visited the same jazz club in Moscow. This knowledge laid the foundation for their relationship and further long-hour talks about music, art, and jazz improvisation. Eventually, Boris grew as a professional in his firm and got a promotion to Director not only because of his jazz-related interests but also because of a new friend at work.
All in all, making new friends and staying with old ones has both positive and negative effects. While old connections may betray at some time, new friendship could create immersive opportunities and gradually change one's life. I firmly believe that making new friends is obviously positive and may boost personal growth and develop one’s character.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
..., beginning from work and continuing to sports or hobbies. Since 2020 a friend of mine...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...m and begin a new chapter in his life? Equally important, new connections may foster c...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...sive opportunities and gradually change ones life. I firmly believe that making new ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3243902439 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90285403879 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541463414634 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9254840511 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.15 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280527418517 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840947153539 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744980801546 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165322927356 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669473075463 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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