Some people think that young people should follow traditions from their society; other people think that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people contend that young people should follow and preserve the traditions of their society. However, others refute this by asserting that the youngsters should be allowed to behave as individuals. Both these aforementioned views will be addressed in this essay before a conclusion is reached.
To initiate, since time immemorial, traditions have played an important key role in our society. They help form the foundation and structure of our families and nations. Besides, traditions make one naton, one family or a group of people distinct from the others. By the way of exemplifying, Westerners celebrate Halloween or Christmas, while the Spring Festival are hold in a myriad of Asian countries. Therefore, young adults should follow traditions from the predecessors so as to preserve cultural’s identities.
On the other hands, youngsters should also be encouraged to identify their own selves. As time goes on, certain traditions and predjuces, especially on women, have become superstious and inappropriate for the modern societies. Women are now encouraged to do tasks that they were not allowed to do in the past. They have opportunities to go to school, pursue higher education or choose whenever they want to get married. For example, in India or Nepal, it is reported that the age of getting married for girls are much higher in the past. The proportion of both boys and girls going to school also significantly increased. This demonstrates the efforts of the governments in encouraging young people to explore and develop their interior potential.
In conclusion, i am of the opinion that young people should follow the traditions but have a chance to behave as individuals in order to identify and develop their own potentials.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.275 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00470506889 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3568509832 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364177978463 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110354070153 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132336821994 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25984854848 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122285760821 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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