Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the world of intermingled and juxtaposed nations, some people assume distinct social traditions should be followed by the young generation. However, some advocate for individualism supporting free styles of behavior. As well as offering my opinion, this essay will discuss both sides of this phenomenon in depth.
On the one hand, preservation of long traditional features properly has its own moral advantages. Specifically, traditional values may support respect for one another, thus improving the cohesion of families and solidarity of the countries as well. For example, traditions teach the young to respect family members and the elderly. This can make the community more organized and civilized because the youth are more considerate and outgoing.
Unfortunately, if the traditions are not continuously inherited, it will fade and disappear through some generations. Hence, it is reasonable that social traditional cultures should be preserved in the long run.
However, there are some people argue that the youth should freely behave as what they want to do. As a matter of fact, there is a widespread consensus that the young generation are living in a world different from that of their ancestors. Additionally, behaving independently possibly involves stimulation of creativity and innovation. Moreover, it is unfair for the youth to follow and preserve those outdated and decadent cultural traditions which are no longer suitable at the present. Therefore, embracing the old traditions will prevent young generations from fast adapting into new environments and developing.
To conclude, this essay provided uphold the unrestrained behaviors of the youth and free expression of their own personalities. They have rights to assert and to be themselves because they are leading the modern world with different regimes and rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58007117438 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08693374808 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601423487544 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4852846214 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280854640102 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824821335411 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719377295356 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149155941521 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811702957415 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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