Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
People have different views about what young individuals should have behaviour as the traditions or individuals. While, such people should have right to live as what they want, I would argue that it is better for people to follow the traditions of their culture.
On the one hand, young people should be allowed to act in their own way since they live in a world different from that of their parents and grandparents. Firstly, it is impossible for young generation to follow all traditions, some of which are outdated with little value. For example, in a new era, young people have a tendency to participate in new environments and experience new lifestyles. Secondly, some customs could prevent young people from accessing to a modern world, which keeps them in poverty and fogginess. For instance, in some mountainous areas, 12-to-16-age-old girls are forced to get married and have children, and they couldn’t approach to education and have to earn for livings at young ages.
On the other hand, there are some reasons why people should acquire the traditions in order to preserve and hold conventional customs. First, young individuals ought to appreciate time-honored traditions to enhance the connection and solidarity of families and country. In some occasions, festivals in particular, people will reunite with their families to witness valuable moments together. Second, there will be a delightful icon in international friends if children still transmit the values of national identity. For instance, in some Asian countries, children usually live with their parents till they passed away, which considered as a religious pious.
In conclusion, while living as individuals is beneficial for young people to some extent, I believe behaving as the traditions of society could help people realizing more many values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30689655172 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90258198232 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548275862069 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0549174443 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.384615385 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357796360208 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134764835887 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801178697079 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241437147045 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406791042557 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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