Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world's fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Since the blooming of the air travel industry, despite its great utility, it has been proven to be the most significant factor contributing to serious pollution, climate change and natural exploitation. In my opinion, there should be a restriction in air travel services which will be replaced by electric planes or other environmentally friendly vehicles.
To commence with, the sharp increase in the number of flights all over the world for the past few years has posed a great threat to the environment as well as the future of the earth. Initially, according to a number of researches, airplanes have been proven to have discharged the most significant amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere everyday. This is the most likely reason to result in bigger holes in the ozone layer, along with an unprecedented rise in global temperature and finally, climate change. Furthermore, the air travel industry also takes up a large proportion of the world’ natural resources which have been under the risk of being used up quickly. The process of creating a plane, putting it in operation and repairing definitely require an enormous amount of gas, oil and other resources.
In addition to that, the overdependence on the air travel of many countries is highly likely to exert a negatively profound impact on the global economy. In recent years, air travel finds its way as one of the most lucrative industries which generate billions of dollars each year, and make great contributions to a higher national revenue. This has made the economy much more vulnerable when Covid 19 arises. Many big countries in the world have experienced a great crisis since a plenty of giant travel agencies have reported to have gone bankrupt.
To conclude, in my point of view, I strongly agree that government should put a limit on air travel and pave the way for a more sustainable means of travelling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, well, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00949367089 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85667310643 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.8907640757 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.916666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182766543989 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634495328623 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679423131068 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114526002982 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389561216249 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.