Some people believe that air travel should be restricted as it causes serious pollution and uses up the world's fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable that the demand for air traveling has been increasing sharply day by day owing to its significant role in transporting. Some critics argue that such kind of transportation ought to be limited in order to prevent some dangerous pollutants from being released and polluting the environment. Although it is a fact that travel by airplane causes numerous negative impacts, I am of the opinion that this form of vehicle should not be restricted due to some advantages which will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, it is undoubted that moving to other regions by airplanes helps people open their minds about the world out there and narrow down the distances between countries. Although with the development of information technology, citizens from a nation can reach others just by a click and several pieces of information will pop up on the internet, they can only realize what those countries want them to know as dark sides are skillfully hidden. Only directly coming to such places in person brings people subjective observations about other nations’ residents and cultures. Moreover, travelling by air, sometimes, assist people from every country to travel overseas which cannot be done by a train or a bus. Clearly, it would be a challenge for the global girl group BlackPink to go to the United States of America to execute their concerts if they do not utilize airplanes.
Additionally, using air travel is also a good way for a nation to boost its economy. Some kinds of merchandise will not be able to transfer from one region to another one by buses, trains, or boats due to its physical nature, including food. Unsurprisingly, moving by boat or other types of transportation takes time which influences negatively on food since it is hard to reserve. Furthermore, governments can take advantage of these fast-moving vehicles to go to other countries for the purpose of communication or in emergency cases that do not allow lateness.
To summarise, I am convinced that air travel should not be banned under any circumstances due to the above benefits. Although it is said that there are many risks which cause serious pollution and running out of some renewable resources if governments continue to allow the use of air travel, I believe that humans will find ways to develop this means of transportation and still maintain the freshness of the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01503759398 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92939466993 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583959899749 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5579565946 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.928571429 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279478552707 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853709501995 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613860523432 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167913960308 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698107069851 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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