Some people think that hard work helps in achieving Financial success while others think it is not the only thing which contributes to financial success. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
A considerable number of people assert that working hard leads to financial security, while others are staunch opponents of the view, claiming that financial stability can be achieved through several other measures. I am in strong support of the latter as savings and expenses play a vital role in achieving financial success.
As a matter of fact, hard work plays an important role in achieving financial security. In order words, people are giving more than a hundred percent at every level starting from school, to taking admission at a prestigious college or university, and further in a job to climb up the corporate ladder or in business to generate revenue to achieve a level of financial stability in their life. To give an example, an entrepreneur puts a number of years of hard work and dedication into their startup or small scale manufacturing company, before generating the profit and having financial stability.
On the other hand, many are in complete disagreement with the aforesaid view, believing that financial success depends on budgeting, monthly expenses, saving, and long-term investment. To add further credence to their argument, they stress that people with sound financial knowledge and discipline have a high rate of achieving their financial goals. For example, due to the compounding factor, a person saving and investing from the age of 25 years is able to enjoy a higher pension return during their retirement life compared to those who start their plans later.
In conclusion, although few individuals state that financial goals are achieved through hard work as it will generate more income, I am an adamant supporter of the view that financial freedom comes with measures such as planning and budgeting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27075812274 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79434129151 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2209114601 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.222222222 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290370218791 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132852222015 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679417543102 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191050525913 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678783316669 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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