Obesity is an increasing public health problem in some parts of the world. Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.
These days, suffering from obesity represents a major threat to the entire world as its harsh influence on human life. A number of researchers had proved that the two main reasons for this issue are human’s eating habits and the work overloaded. In order to tackle this complication, some productive methods will be analyzed in this essay.
Initially, being corpulent undeniably originated from the unhealthy meals and the excessive workload. People undeniably prefer eating convenient food which comprises a great deal of obesity-causing substances, typically, the fat that could make the weight gain out of control. Fast food, for instance, is one of the most trendy dishes that attracts thousands of consumers, especially, youngsters. This food, however, has made a considerable increase in the ratio of overweight people. Additionally, some detrimental habits involved in humans’ working are also a worth-minding cause. Owing to the excessive amount of work, people tend to spend less time on doing exercise. Consequently, the extra calories are not burned and prompt obesity.
With an intention to cope with this problem, people had better set up a healthy diet immediately. An ideal meal is proved to consist of sufficient nutrition which is produced from vegetables, fruits that allows consumers to manage their weight significantly. Instead of going out for a meal, humans are suggested to cook on their own to ensure the quality and the nutritional content of their food. Furthermore, commonly doing exercises is also a productive way to keep fit and stay in shape. The more exercises we do, the more inessential calories are emitted, hence, people’s weight could be controlled strictly.
In conclusion, being obese is a ubiquitous illness among human life, however, this sort of disease may leave many serious effects that need to be solved right away. Therefore, by carrying out the quoted formula, I believe that the rate of obesity could be decreased considerably.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35350318471 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9717539867 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643312101911 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0012528067 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.8823529412 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166863553268 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446264701362 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441502475348 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940877422173 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468227344945 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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