Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.
What problem does it cause?
What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
These days, grand enterprises have huge budgetary allocations for marketing and promotion, and consumers, consequently, tend to purchase their commodities. This tendency brings about significant influences on the economic foundation. With an intent to iron out these matters, some viable solutions will be depicted in this essay.
To begin with, the dissimilar funds for marketing and advertising among the large and home-run firms are the underlying element prompting the economic imbalance. With big capital, large companies stand a great chance of exaggerating their reputation as well as their products. Due to these boosts, buyers will be attracted to shop promotional items while local non-promotional ones are commonly ignored. This renders businesses less competitive and triggers the large enterprises’ monopolization in the market which leads to limited diversity of services. Thus, family businesses have to confront a significant loss in avenue or even be on the verge of closing down.
To tackle the adverse impacts above, the authority should enforce regulations to facilitate domestic establishments. Initially, exempting local manufacturers from a few taxes is a primary prerequisite. It lays the foundation for them to lower the running cost and expand their productions to maximize the revenue. The government can also assist domestic producers with advertising their goods on the state channels. This will accelerate their renown and arouse public interest in opting for town-made commodities.
In conclusion, the expenditure on publicity and promotion brings a number of utilities for large establishments, it still has some adversities for home-run companies. Therefore, it is time for the government to take action to bridge the gaps between these firms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75471698113 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21168212941 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.765206044 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185729901057 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553280499289 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346178379877 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103892186167 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420294449308 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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