A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday
- describe some possible disadvantages
- say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Albert,
I received your message, telling me about your first camping adventure in the Highland Mountains, during this summer vacation. I am happy to support and advice you in this great idea and I’m sure it will be an unforgettable moment.
Camping is the best way to run from stress, to relax and enjoy the nature. Such holiday it will be enjoyable, and you will benefit from it, by exploring new places in the mountains, discover the river around even you will find new natural species, you have never seen before.
Addition to that, some difficulties you might face on your way to the camping area. It is only reachable through hiking, where you need to walk from 20min with all your stuff. There are no shops around, even petrol station is 60km far. Therefore, be sure to prepare all your things before moving.
However, I was checking my total annual leaves from work where I was thinking to travel back home this summer and join you to this camping. Since it has been a while I did not came home and already miss the old days together when we were youth.
Thanks for asking my advice and waiting for the upcoming months to meet again, take care of yourself and stay safe,
Your Best Friend,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...ng. Since it has been a while I did not came home and already miss the old days toge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58986175115 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2081860678 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668202764977 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3615888097 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5454545455 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318805722183 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105206031527 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084834934648 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131914145335 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714647200519 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.