Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that these days many types of animal are disappearing around the world. While some people consider that individuals are responsible for saving animals from exctincting, I side with those who thinks that concentrating on issues of human beings is more needful.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why it is important to conserve animals from exctincting. First of all, animals are part of life chain without which human beings can not survive. They play a big role in human survival as they are source of consumption from which people can provide themselves with food, milk and meat. In addition to this, individuals can get from animals leather and fur to make excellent material clothes such as durable shoes, belts, wallets and others. Furthermore, it is obvious that herbivores are eaten by predators that consequently they do not allow herbivores to breed, thereby protecting vegetation from disappearing.
On the other hand, in spite of these arguments, I would agree with those who believe that we should focus more on problems of human beings. By far human soul is more important and intelligent than animals, so people feel that more attention should be given to human problems. Moreover, the number of individuals who suffer from hunger and lack of clean water is increasing around the world. For instance, lack of food is still cause to death of so many people in Africa and still there is no solution to this. Furthermore, one more thing that people now face is a terrible spreading disease "Covid-19". Day by day, more and more people are becoming victims of this illness. However, several types of vaccines were prepared, but despite this none of them turned out to be fully valid.
In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be be wrong to individuals do not protect animals from exctincting but, I believe that we should concentrate more on problems of human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in spite of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80743280375 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546583850932 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6336919221 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4666666667 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369881258417 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117140629743 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774811893916 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246011631154 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612432576871 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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