The pie chart below shows the frequency of U S Adults online purchasing habits in 2015 while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preferences

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The pie chart below shows the frequency of U.S. Adults’ online purchasing habits in 2015, while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preferences.

The pie chart describes how regularly U.S adults shopped on the Internet in 2015 whereas the bar chart presents a detailed categorization of online shoppers' options.
Overall, a majority of U.S grown-up citizens purchased items online rather less often and buying goods in brick-and-mortar stores was far more enjoyed than shopping online.
As can be seen from the pie chart, over a third of adults in the United States chose to obtain items online less often while the percentage of those who surf the net for shopping a few times a month was slightly lower with 28 percent. Meanwhile, the group of people who shopped online on a weekly basis accounted for the smallest proportion in the chart with only 15 percent. Similarly, one fifth of U.S adults claimed to have never purchased anything on the Internet.
It is illustrated in the bar chart that coming to stores in person to pick up items was more preferred by adults in the U.S. In general, all online shoppers bought two thirds of their items from physical stores and saved the remaining one third for online purchase. The similar pattern could be found among the groups of monthly online shoppers and less frequent shoppers where visiting stores directly took up the higher percentage. However, weekly online shoppers experienced an opposite pattern of behavior as they the percentages of online shopping and direct shopping were 62 percent and 38 percent respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, so, third, whereas, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01680672269 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64255986892 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579831932773 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.864190558 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.25 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261579327949 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12228299364 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657946086794 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174915717211 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066934442177 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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