Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men applying for a job with police or military others think women are less suitable for this kind of jobs . Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The Advent of 21st century has brought numerous transformations in this world in each and every sector. Decisions are made to make this society livable for everyone by implementing equality terms for every caste as well as every gender. Nowadays, authorities are making more regulations for women to make them equal to men in this world and some people argue that number of female reserved seats should be increased in police and military. I also agree with this statement.whereas, others contradict this statement owing to have less strength in women than male. These both views will be explained in an appropriate way in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, most of the countries have male priorities societies from unimagined time. For smooth running of the society it is essential to make equal society where should not to be a discrimination with female. Due to this, most of the nations are working for it. In every job sectors female have equal opportunities as compare to men. But, still they have to face discrimination in military and police job sessions. Therefore, a host of people argue that they should have equal chances to recruit in these jobs that will make them self empowered and women would be able to secure themselves. For instance, in India, a survey conducted by national news found that violence issues with women has been decreased due to joining these jobs.
In contrast, opponents of this statement argue that, women should not be recruited in these two streams because these kind of jobs require a lot of strength and it is clear that they have less potential than men. Therefore, they are not able to get equity. It is stated that if women have equal numbers in police ans military, nations would have to face some serious issues.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable that for making problem free society women should get equal opportunity in every sector whether it is police or military. To my mind, it is the best time to break male present society. I believe that women can put full efforts also in these works because they have intellectual skills as it is known both mental and physical strength are required in every job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86956521739 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6672714884 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510869565217 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5560849498 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367366024599 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112555978265 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636953137086 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23700586935 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446778653951 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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