The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.
What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, smoking is prevailing all over the world even if repercussions are well known of this habit people are addicted to this owing to some rumours such as it is stress reliever. Due to this, people get attracted towards it. Although, this problem can be solved by awaring people about this rumour's truth. As well as, some rigorous steps need to take. Both reasons and solutions will be explained in upcoming paragraphs before writing the conclusion.
To commence with, it is undeniable that smoking is injurious for heath. It not only creates heart diseases but also affects lungs directly. Nevertheless, demos are still in this grab due to having some rumours. It is stated that smoking is the best way to relieve stress. In this busy pace of life, for getting sigh of relief, inhabitants get attracted towards this addiction. For instance, in India, a survey conducted by the health organisation found that those people smoking much who are living stressful lives.
It is considerable that every problem have a solution. According to this, this obstacle also can be handled by taking some essential steps. First of all, awareness campaigns should be organised by authorities because it is the best solution for each existing problem. Demos should be awared that this is nothing except a health injurious product. It has not any role in relieving stress. Secondly, it is stated that prevention is better than cure. Therefore, smoking products should be banned with proper restrictions. Governments should stop this before becoming serious issues. By prohibiting the use and sell of smoking, people can be saved from dangerous problems. For example, in India, in 2019, government banned poppy in whole country and stringent rules were made. Resultantly, positive outcomes got to see.
In conclusion, although ramifications of smoking are well known but still smoking related interest can be seen among people easily due to having assumptions. However this can be solved as a whole if government will organise campaigns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... this, people get attracted towards it. Although, this problem can be solved by awaring ...
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Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rumours'' or 'rumour's'?
Suggestion: rumours'; rumour's
... be solved by awaring people about this rumours truth. As well as, some rigorous steps ...
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Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...eople easily due to having assumptions. However this can be solved as a whole if govern...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18292682927 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73923043987 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582317073171 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9643921122 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8333333333 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263357040339 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722404636928 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553788891611 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1790832914 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275968977759 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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