Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems.
Do you agree or disagree?
The best kind of diet to follow has always been a controversial issue. Most people advise that taking up a vegetarian diet is necessary as meat consumption can pose grave health risks. Eating too much meat may lead to complication, I still believe that maintaining a balanced diet which consists of all food groups and not just a vegetarian diet is healthier.
To begin with, as all the scientist claim, human body needs all variety of food nutrition available in the nature. To be specific, there might be some nutritious materials in meat which cannot be found in particular vegetables. Take 'amino acids' as an example. Up to the present, scientists have discovered over fifty different kinds of them in our bodies. Amazingly enough, this number only can be obtained by consuming different kinds of food during the week. A study conducted in England in 2003 revealed that people who had used all kinds of nutrition such as white meat, red meat and vegetables, had healthier bodies in contrast to those who just had followed a vegetarian diet.
Secondly, overusing each types of food may give rise to disorders. In fact, in this case over consumption of red meat will cause irreversible physical repercussions. As a matter of fact, watching our diet and using all needed material, not only prevents us from diseases, but also helps to live longer and healthier. Most nutritious doctors are of the opinion that human body requires certain amount of meat, vegetables, diary produce and brown bread throughout the day.
To conclude, provided that individuals have a healthy diet with no overusing any types of food, it is believed that they are healthier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, in contrast, in fact, in particular, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98561151079 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76334859187 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607913669065 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3247190152 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153299935312 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497939227613 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549689639502 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964860681633 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713620624712 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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