Some people say that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this 21st centuary, pollution plays a gnificant role in the economy, due to deforestation, increasing number of vehicles on road and etc,. few people argue that government should take decision against such problems. Consequently this essay agrees that government should help people to reside health issues due to pollution.
First of all, the number of vehicles on road is rapidly higher in every year. For instance, as the survey conducted by air control pollution in last few years, the individuals using private cars is about 70 percent than used public transport. The increasing number of private cars causes higher pollution not only noise but also, air. Additionally it affects all living factors.
Secondly, deforestation is the main cause of climate change and global warming. For example, in every year around 40 percent of rainforest have been cut down, destroying wildlife habits causes the extinction of various species of flora and fauna. Moreover, the usage of fossil fuels like oil and gas are running out, however these affects the nature internally and externally.
To put it in a nutshell, I pendown saying that the pollution causes various problems in human beings. So the government should take a stricter pollution controler to the factories, transport system etc.
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- Some people say that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people say that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease To what extend do you agree or disagree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31067961165 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74114999401 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665048543689 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8743950781 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15055349513 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546102557343 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682193592329 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936440679473 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824713044026 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.