Goverments shoud introudce heathcare with prevents illness rather than cures it.
How far do you agree with this statement.
Nowadays, there are a lot of things which are really harmful to people's health like pollution. So preventing illness is more important for us. In my opinion, it is very necessary for goverments to introduce some ways to proctect people's health rather than cures illness.
First, all of people in the world should try to prevent sickness because it is supremely essential for us. When we prevent illness we can have good healthy to proctect again a lot of different virus which are extremely harmful to our healthy and always make strenuous efforts to destroyy us. Moreover, we also needn't face-to-face with dangerous disease which can kill us like cancer, inflammation of lungs.... Most of people know that if we get these disease, we must stand hardships and die extremely fast and no doctors can save our ives. For example, when I come to hospital to test my healthy. I am always advised to try my best to prevent illness and protect my healthy. In my view, curing is also very critical for us when we are unlucky to fail illness. On the contrary, we should understand that both dotocts and experts can't cure it clearly, consequently, we can get it again and again.
I think due to the fact that nobody is interested in treating with disease, especially dangerous disease, we should find useful ways to prevent illness instead of waiting being get illness and then try our best to cure it. In additon, the goverments should be responsible for enhance truth awareness of population about protect their healthy like doing execerise regularly, having a balance's regiment.... However, the best way to prevent sickness is find a suitable ways by ourselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Nowadays, there are a lot of things whic...
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...es health rather than cures illness. First, all of people in the world should...
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...forts to destroyy us. Moreover, we also neednt face-to-face with dangerous disease whi...
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Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
... like cancer, inflammation of lungs.... Most of people know that if we get these disease, we m...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this disease' or 'these diseases'?
Suggestion: this disease; these diseases
....... Most of people know that if we get these disease, we must stand hardships and die extrem...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nderstand that both dotocts and experts cant cure it clearly, consequently, we can g...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...uently, we can get it again and again. I think due to the fact that nobody...
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Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
... to prevent sickness is find a suitable ways by ourselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, for example, i think, in my opinion, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8865248227 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66732676303 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549645390071 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9693781868 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139384086875 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502716253219 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042164308819 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109147270748 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283435622497 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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