Some people believe that air travel shoulf be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world's fuel resource. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Airplane has become one of the most convenient means of transport in our day-to-day life. However, there exits an opinion that government should prohibit the air travel because it is the culprit of severe pollution and depletion of fuel energy. From my personal perspective, I strongly disapprove of this school of thought for several reasons.
To begin with, traveling by planes is an effective and modern way to help people save time. It is obvious that plane has been the fastest compared with others means of transport like car, subway, boat and so on. For example, if you go from Hanoi to Ho Chi Minh City, you must spend almost 2 days on car but airplane just take you nearly 3 hours, which means you can save more than 1 day for other activities. Besides, plane is also the vehicle with the largest capacity so hundreds passengers can take the same flight to the destination. This leads to the fact that the amount of toxic gases that air travel releases into the atmosphere is equal to other vehicles. Thus, it is impossible to conclude that travelling by plane causes serious air pollution.
More importantly, restricting air travel would affect tremendously to the international tourism as tourism industry is the backbone of many economies of the world. Numerous countries depend heavily on the development of tourism due to its enormous profit contributing to the national budget. If air travel was prohibited, these countries would be stagnated for such a long time without any sign of recovery. Moreover, other businesses involve in tourism such as hotel services and leisure center definitely cannot develop as potentially as they used to. So if we discourage air travel, it would create new and even worse problems.
However, it is undeniable that the descending level of fossil fuels and increasing of pollution are one of the most major consequences of travelling by planes. Instead of restricting air travel, government should find more feasible solution such as using renewable energy for planes or reducing the fumes from other private road vehicles.
In conclusion, despite the fact that air travel causes serious pollutants and uses up the fuel resources, prohibiting it would result in more adverse problems, let alone prevent them. The existing consequences can be dealt with easily by using environmentally friendly energy as an alternative of fossil fuels.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: THERE_EXITS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'exists'?
Suggestion: exists
... in our day-to-day life. However, there exits an opinion that government should prohi...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10969387755 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79759371822 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4698830794 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.277777778 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234792627626 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070150755744 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613583592867 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130830965726 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396553597779 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: THERE_EXITS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'exists'?
Suggestion: exists
... in our day-to-day life. However, there exits an opinion that government should prohi...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10969387755 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79759371822 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4698830794 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.277777778 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234792627626 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070150755744 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613583592867 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130830965726 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396553597779 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.