When a new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sport facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time in. Too what extent do you agree or disagree?
When planning a new town, its authority has a tendency to put more effort and emphasis on building public parks and sport facilities than shopping centers for dwellers’ demand in their spare time. From my personal perspective, I strongly approve of this idea for several reasons.
To begin with, providing citizens with sport facilities is an effective way to improve their physical health and thus reduce the government’s budget for medical expenses and social welfare programs in long term. Nowadays, people tend to be reluctant in choosing between leisure activities like watching TV, playing video games and doing sport to keep fit in their free time. In the majority cases, they make the former choice as they blame for lack of public sport facilities. Therefore if the sport centers are provided with various kinds of exercises, town dwellers are more likely to do regular exercise and have a healthier lifestyle leading to the fact that they hardly face up with health-related problems.
Furthermore, a park is not only an ideal place for people to do exercises, especially those are not interested in competitive sports, but it also gives people a sense of unity and belonging to the community. It is obvious that elder people show bigger preference jogging, dancing or relaxing walking in green environment to going to gym clubs as plants and trees can absorb waste gases and provide green shade and comfortable atmosphere to set people in good mood. In addition, those who spend time in the parks can have more opportunities to make friends with other like-minded people. Thus the bond is formed and tightened contributing to the social development of the whole society.
In contrast, government should also take consideration in shopping centers as its main function is for people to purchase various items. People certainly have other demands in their daily which sport facilities and public parks cannot satisfy them.
In conclusion, in the process of urban planning and construction, shopping malls are necessary but the importance of developing port facilities and public parks is undeniable and need to be put more emphasis on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18624641834 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78186754499 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604584527221 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5786879398 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.230769231 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393975764056 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124255100606 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965288026531 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214389309525 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670869303102 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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