Some think that it is more important for children to engage in outdoor activities instead of playing videogames.
To what extent to you agree or disagree?
There has been a growing concern among the parents, regarding their children spending considerate amount of time in front of computers or smartphones and not going out to play.
The technological advancement in the field on computer has made it more affordable thereby more accessible to the general public. This has led to development of E-games, also known as electronic games. The organizers of e games hold massive events, inviting players from all over the globe. You dont need to be of a particular height, weight, body etc to play these games. In other words, these games aren't physically demanding, thereby more appealing to the children who are left behind in physical sports. These games are mentally challenging though. It encourages critical thinking and analytical ability, just like chess or backgammon. This has given new identity to children who aren't physically endowed but are mentally fit.
Critics of videogames point towards the fact that children who were exposed to videogames at an early age are likely to suffer from myopia. And it can't be ignored that the number of cases of myopia i.e. near-sightedness are on a whole new level compared to the last decade. Physical activity is not limited to games. It includes yoga, jogging, exercise etc. These activities not only adhere to physical fitness (as the name suggests) but also contributes to mental health. Besides this, once a kid gets glasses, thers no way out of that.
I would like to conclude that Children should be encouraged to take up any physical activity, be it games or yoga or exercise. Some videogames are even good for mental health. But exposing the same for an elongated period of time is harmful to the children. Since childhood is the base of adulthood, it has to be nurtured properly. There should be a proper balance between both.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, regarding, so, as to, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98366013072 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72991639151 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.140365756 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152522336576 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414584799055 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431477969206 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850303624263 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164868214249 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.