Obesity is an increasing public health problem in some parts of the world. Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.
Obesity has become a major public health issue in a number of countries. Poor diet and lack of exercise are the primary reasons behind this. While obesity is a serious problem for these reasons, there are solutions.
The biggest cause of the obesity problem, in my opinion, is poor diet. Fast food restaurants have become widespread, and people like to eat at them because they are cheap and convenient. Unfortunately, the meals they sell are high in calories and low in nutrition. Snack foods, especially chips and sodas, are also very popular. Like fast food meals, these foods provide a lot of calories but little nutrition.
Another major cause of obesity is lack of exercise. People drive everywhere, so they have little opportunity to walk. People also work long hours and don't have much time to go to the gym or play sports. Children seem to prefer sitting in front of the computer to playing active games outside with their friends.
Fortunately, there are solutions to this problem. Education is very important. Public campaigns to explain the importance of good diet and regular exercise could get people to think about changing their habits. In addition, making healthy food more available would encourage people to eat better. Schools, for example, could provide lunches with lots of fresh fruits and vegetables.
Obesity is a problem because it can lead to some serious health conditions. If people are encouraged to eat better and exercise more, however, the situation could be greatly improved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o walk. People also work long hours and dont have much time to go to the gym or play...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0843373494 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56976651475 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606425702811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7864460113 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.6315789474 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1052631579 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188881615299 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608448560957 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897323940992 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111463931979 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774429492372 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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