Đề 1: The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?
It is no dout that more people have sustain serious health issues during recent years. Some individuals believe that the government needs to allocate funds for the deterent of health issues rather than complexed curing tools as well as medical facilities. From my perpective, it is mandatory for the authorities to invest in both these.
On the one hand, the prevention of medical problems as a sustainable measure is more time and cost-effective. many could improve overall health in long-term through a combination of healthy diet and regular exercise. more specifically, some people maintain a balanced eating and drinking habit as well as a level of daily exercise, which effectively decrease the risk of health conditions. In contrast, the others with serious diseases have encoutered two options including spend on immediate treatment or wait for inevitable doom. It is undeniable that individuals and the community accepting undergo treatment have suffered from a huge amount of curing cost namely treatment and drug expenses. Therefore, public health campains should be launched to raise public health awareness and make human lifestyle changes.
On the other hand, the authorities still should invest in their medical quality improvement. With more the appearance of strange diseases, it is unavoidable for the pateints to life-threatening conditions and even premature dealth. As a result, it is extremely necessary for the government to build sophisticated medical gadgets and facilities with aim to meet citizens’s curing demands. For example, the outbreak of covid pandemic in India is often associated with the rise in the mortality rate here because of treatment devise shortage such as oxygen containers, hospital vacancies and vaccine.
To summarize, for the most effective outcome, the authorities should concentrate on detering health problems with balanced lifestyle as well as improving in medical quality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58644067797 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0171510121 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5222383041 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.714285714 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169917846781 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561500169798 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349223985675 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102437600365 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337767776676 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.