The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives information about the transformation from sugar cane to sugar. Overall, the process has 7 steps in three main stages, beginning with the cultivation of sugarcane then followed by chemical production and ending with the release of sugar.
In terms of the first stage, the plants are cultivated and the most suitable time to harvest is after about 12 to 18 months. The mature sugarcanes can be harvested by hand with a reaping hook or, instead, an industrial farming machinery which is more productive than individual power. After harvesting, the collected plants are crushed through a filtering machine with 2 big wheels and a large round box so that it is able to contain the sugarcane juice.
The next mentioned stage is the process of chemical transformation with 2 small steps: purifying juice and evaporating. Firstly, a limestone filter in the shape of a funnel is prepared for the purification where the juice is poured through and the sugar cane essences flow into the evaporator. Under the high temperature in the evaporation, the essences from sugarcane become syrup, which then all the sugar crystals in the mixture are separated and cooled. Finally, sugar is released.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12182741117 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85255702919 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619289340102 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5895517115 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.111111111 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187192807712 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902567615512 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100488733663 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1422550172 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107036917521 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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