The number of international visitors going to Australia continues to grow, making the Australian government very aware of the importance of its tourism industry.
The chart below shows the spending patterns of these visitors while they are in Australia.
The given pie depicts the proportion of international visitors' expenditure on seven patterns (education fees; food, drink, accommodation; shopping; entertainment/ gambling; organised tours; transport and other), in Australia from 1997 to 1998.
It can be seen that the spending in each category has not changed much over the three years.
Food, drink, accommodation was the most paying of travellers in each of three years and had a moderate rise over the period. This was the same as education fees. Starting from 10% and then, this figure increased steadily by 1% each year. The expense of transport saw slight growth, accounting for 10% at the beginning of the period, then remaining stable at 11% in two next years.
Shopping is one of the three patterns having huge figures. Controversially, while food, drink, accommodation and education fees had an upward trend, the percentage of shopping fall year by year, 24%, 23%, and 20% respectively. Entertainment/ gambling and organised tours relatively had the same figure, about 5% in almost years of the period.
- The number of international visitors going to Australia continues to grow making the Australian government very aware of the importance of its tourism industry The chart below shows the spending patterns of these visitors while they are in Australia 11
- The number of international visitors going to Australia continues to grow making the Australian government very aware of the importance of its tourism industry The chart below shows the spending patterns of these visitors while they are in Australia Summa 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'visitors'' or 'visitor's'?
Suggestion: visitors'; visitor's
... detail the proportion of international visitors expenditure on seven patterns education...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00874761251 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668604651163 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.1623318434 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0715888353551 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025863194448 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450517126311 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0508157474011 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569104099367 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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