The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare three categories of energy used to generate electricity in four nations from 2003 to 2008.
Overall, most electricity in Morocco and Sweden came from hydro power, while fossil fuel was the underlying source of electricity in India and Vietnam. Also, nuclear power was not used in electricity production in Morocco and Vietnam throughout the period.
In India, fossil fuel contributed to 82% of the total amount of electricity, compared to only 4% of their Sweden's counterpart. By contrast, the rate of electricity produced by hydro power in Sweden was 52%, while the figure for India was only 14%. Similarly, nuclear power accounted for 44% of the entire quantity of Sweden's electricity, which was eleven times higher than the percentage of India's electricity generated by this kind of energy.
On the other hand, Morocco produced 95% of the amount of electricity owing to hydro power, whereas fossil fuel constituted one-nineteenth of this country's figure. Conversely, fossil fuel came in first with contributing to over half of Vietnam's quantity of electricity, followed by 44% produced by hydropower.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ossil fuel constituted one-nineteenth of this countrys figure. Conversely, fossil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, similarly, so, whereas, while, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31284916201 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93508303115 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541899441341 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1066606875 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.875 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 5.23603664747 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113713900014 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578146406529 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422504135194 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844866803784 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362752128816 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.