You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.
What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Writing task 2
An essential element of the ecosystem is water. Water pollution is very harmful for animals and human’s life. Some people want to seek to protect the environment but it is a big problem for them. Possible causes of water pollution has many cases. Firstly, when people go to the beach, they fling trash to the beach and they don’t have consciousness to protect enviroment. Secondly, now, having many illegal factories, it discharges wastewater into the aquatic enviroment and it drives many fishes to die. Water pollution makes animals and human’s life quality decrease a lots. It makes fishes die and when people eat it, they could be food poisoning. Fish and marine can not live if thet don’t have a fresh water. People can not eat animals under the sea if the water is polluted. But in the world has some people who make water pollute, so the fishes will die soon unless there are human interventions. Water pollution affects the tourist industry of coastal regions. In short, water pollution is mostly the result of people’s activities and people are harming them and animals. It also affects the enviroment.
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| 2021-09-24 | Sereine Elysian | 89 | view |
| 2021-09-24 | Sereine Elysian | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 570, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...imals and human’s life quality decrease a lots. It makes fishes die and when people ea...
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Line 1, column 700, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'fresh water'.
Suggestion: fresh water
... marine can not live if thet don’t have a fresh water. People can not eat animals under the s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1083, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people are harming them and animals. It also affects the enviroment.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93650793651 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56887978719 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582010582011 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4869493658 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6428571429 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192277960196 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775067911702 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588661721448 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192277960196 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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