Some people store personal and private information online, including banking, contacts and addresses. Is it a positive or negative trend?
It is true that personal and private information, such as banking, contacts, and addresses, is stored online by some individuals. In my opinion, despite a number of inconveniences, this tendency should be considered as a very welcome development.
On one hand, critics of keeping all the secret details of our lives tend to point out a combination of reasons. First and foremost, criminals increasingly use the Internet to steal people's money since computer hackers may be able to discover your personal information, such as bank account databases. Another compelling reason is that many internet users have been victims of online scams, particularly through mobile phones, as a result, they paid money for goods or services that do to exist or are worthless. For instance, women like shopping for clothes, and they always want to have the cheapest yet beautiful ones, because of this, attackers know how to manipulate them to buy the latest version of clothing at an affordable price.
On the other hand, in spite of the downsides given above, I believe that this trend should be considered as progress. The primary reason is that in today's society, everyone has a smartphone that connects to the Internet so that it is easier to store all the necessary statistics on their phone than jot them down on a piece of paper. To illustrate, it is definitely more comfortable for consumers to pay the bills at the supermarkets by just taking a phone out and scan it into a machine. Furthermore, they can find their personal details faster online as phones and computers have a selection function through different apps and websites.
In conclusion, I believe that although online storage may have lots of dangers and it is too not difficult for people to stole information from someone. Storing personal and private details on the internet is a worthwhile development because it is more convenient to have everything we need in one place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in spite of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01242236025 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89569587301 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599378881988 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6885713817 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166834877516 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600101113534 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683195995447 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11069786808 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048731408969 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.