All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons and solution to it?
Nowadays, our lives are greatly more comfortable and convenient thanks to the rapid development of society. However, this can cause certain problems, one of those being obesity, which affects both children and adults. This essay will discuss some possible causes to this growing problem and propose suitable solutions to them.
One of the main reasons why the obesity rates are rising is that many people these day eat unhealthy diets, more specifically, consume junk food on a daily basis. In this modern and industrial world, people are constantly working around the clock and spare little time to prepare themselves proper meals. Due to that fact, a lot of the time people tend to resort to quick, cheap and delicious unhealthy junk food instead of a nutritious, packed-with-greens meal. Children also love junk food. This can be because of either its tastiness or its trendiness among their friends. This complicated problems can be addressed by many different ways. Firstly, parents need to educate their children on the advantages of having a healthy, balanced diet and feed them with nutritious food regularly. Secondly, the government should tax junk food more heavily in order to make them less affordable and lower the price for organic, healthy products. Thirdly, restrictions against fast food advertisements can also be put out by authorities.
Another cause to the rising rates of the overweighted is the lack of physical exercises and activities. A large number of the population is now living in big cities, where it is crowded and offer little space to do exercise such as parks or woods or even backyards. Because of that, many people of this generation do not exercise daily. To tackle this issue, more home workout instructions ought to be publicized and encouraged to follow. For example, Japanese's authorities put out a national show every day at 3 in the afternoon, in which there are instructions for home workouts and stretches that almost everyone in Japan is familiar with and follow to the point that it became sort of a tradition. School should be invested more in Physical Education and also grade student more strictly on it. Opportunities to play sports in schools should also be offered.
In conclusion, obesity rates have increased drastically these past years. But we can always turn it around and make a change for ourselves and our future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79751208656 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598465473146 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9192494885 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151783188773 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042206886068 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533914012807 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924396707316 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728321749239 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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