The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the growth of salmons. Overall, this process not only describe how the appearance of salmons alter as they grow but also includes the change in their living environments. There are three main stages in the life cycle, beginning with fries and and finising with adult salmons.
To begin with, salmon eggs are laid near small stones and reeds on the base of an upper river. 5 to 6 months later, the eggs start to hatch and take on the form of small fish . The fish, which are called fries, range from 3-8 cm in lenghth each.
In the next stage, the fries move to the lower part of the river where the flow is fast and stay there for 4 years. At this point, they grow bigger by approximately 9 cm and become smolts
After that, they move again and live in an open sea. After 5 years, the adult salmons, which are 70 to 76 cm long, are ready to move back to the upper river for reproduction. The life cycle then repeats itself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...stages in the life cycle, beginning with fries and and finising with adult salmon...
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Suggestion: and
...n the life cycle, beginning with fries and and finising with adult salmons. To beg...
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Suggestion: .
...hatch and take on the form of small fish . The fish, which are called fries, range...
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... by approximately 9 cm and become smolts After that, they move again and live in ...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'cycles'.
Suggestion: cycles
... upper river for reproduction. The life cycle then repeats itself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3595505618 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14558598415 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64606741573 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2835237395 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924877743405 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394663590444 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362994002913 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511120426162 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210909531879 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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