Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
It is common that most people who want go to museums have to pay entrance fees. In my opinion, the drawbacks of this are outweighed by the benefits.
There are some drawbacks of charging admission. As people are required to pay an entrance fee to enter a museum, there is no doubt that they are discouraged from visiting these places and would rather choose other free entertainment forms. Hence, museums might experience a great loss in the number of visitors and face the possibility of being closed down. On the societal level, it is possible that people have fewer oppotunities to enrich their knowledge about culture, history and other crucial areas as they are reluctant to pay to visit educational places like museums.
However, I would argue that those mentiond above are insignificant to the advantages. It is true that the money from entrance tickets can provide fund to pay for the maintenance of important artifacts and the upgrade of the museum's facilities. Therefore, people can have a better visiting experience . Without charging admission, it would be very difficult to afford the expense of maintaining historical objects as well as covering the operating and managerial cost. In this case, the museums might be threatened with bankrupcy.
In conclusion, the advantages of visitors to museums paying entrance fees outweigh the disadvantages. However, I think it would be best to only charge an affordable amount of money to visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17721518987 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88078760445 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586497890295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8168656944 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3846153846 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222788824312 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748777014186 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395906528109 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13785642541 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260997204915 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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