Some people believe that the best way to travel within a city is by car. Others believe it is best to travel by bicycle.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays half of the people travel in the city in their own cars or taxi when they plan to travel.There are strong views on both sides which I will discuss now.
On the one hand, travelling arround the city as well as seing the city itself namely, historical monuments is now very popular among the people. Additionally, the most important thing when traveling is the transport system in order to, you have to walk long distances even when traveling in the city.Furthermore. most people do not choose public transportation because of uncomfortable and they just like to travel by car. For many people , a car is acceptable for travelling within the city because if they wanted to travel abroad, they would choose other transporter systems such as a plane or a train. After all, when driving around the city the car is both convenient ana fast to get where you want to go.
On the other hand, there are many benefits and conveniences of cycling arround the city. Firstly, if people travel by bicycle, they firs benefit from their health and then enjoy the scenery in the open air. Secondly, a majority of citizens also choose a bicycle if they want to travel in the city due to it is absolutely harmless to the environment and it is also good for themselves. The bike is often convenient for double travelers although this trip is time consuming.
Overall, I feel that, many citizens prefer cycling when traveling it the city, because during the trip people enjoy the fresh air and natural scenery and feel happy during the trip.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, after all, i feel, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74906367041 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62657944506 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9009196687 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.272727273 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256231728159 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105456345293 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476265892419 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152642880514 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067958516494 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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