Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success ? what makes a successful person?
It has often been noticed that if you have a mansion or big branded car, people will love to be your friend, thinking that you have successful life. I believe that working hard take to your goal that is directly proportional to making lucrative money. Also, there are other elements like supportive family, job satisfaction and caring life partner.
To begin with, it has been noticed that if you are living in a villa with all modcons. Also, if you are spendthrift and have earned your name in top most list of billionaire you will be counted as successful man or women no matter how have you earned the money. Most of the people count luxurious life as a victorious life. For instance, Bill Gates a renowned name that everyone is aware of now, who developed the software is counted in the topmost successful and most earning personality. Also, Rak Kundra whose name is trolling most was also counted in successful man, however when people got to know his involvement in pornography he is the most hated person now.
On the other hand, there are elements like if your parents support in your decision of getting involved in the army for country love. Furthermore, couple who work with love and affection for their children is a glorious life. As it is well known fact that success is a another word of happiness. Not only life partners support but also if you get the job that you dreamt of gives you immense satisfaction. For example, a great freedom fighter Bhagat singh sacrificed his life for country. The entire nation bow head in front of his statute. At the same time a well-known name Mirabai chanu, who has won silver medal for India proved that wealth is not only the way to measure success.
To recapitulate, I would rather say that when people get success in most of the cases they get rewarded in terms of money, however it is not the case with every person. Few people who love to dedicate their entire life helping poor people are also the successful person from their point of view because what they dreamt they achieved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... for their children is a glorious life. As it is well known fact that success is a...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s it is well known fact that success is a another word of happiness. Not only lif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66298342541 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43529870276 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53591160221 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4211219375 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2941176471 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217411785936 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640266971853 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612186092564 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128777994552 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00457132036445 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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