People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
In contemporary era, there are various drugs which is used in the form of medicine. although, present day’s youngsters do experiments with legal and illegal drugs in there earlier age. some sociologists argue that parents and other members of community often set a negative example. Therefore, in this essay i will highlight the causes and effects of promoting drug usage by teens.
To begin with, there are several factors why drugs are not useful to use as a long-term in adults. One of the most important reasons, it cause multifarious health problem. To explain, the drugs contain so many preservatives and toxin substance which have the direct connection with health issues. For instance, 2018 survey show 90 percent person who use drugs contain health issues such as lung cancer, liver damage and kidney functioning. Eventually, drugs are not only cause users but also other people.
However, there are some side effects widespread drug uses. As advertisement are the main sources of drug promotion, mostly young follow famous personality from dress up to diet. When they watch that actors are using drugs they also attract towards it. Moreover, some parents use it in the front of their children so that they try to consume it. Henceforth, the drugs adverts and parent are setting bad illustration for future generation.
To conclude, although drug have its cause and effect for long-term usage, it play the vital role in medical line. I opine that government should be banned illegal drugs and make strict law to save upcoming youth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16141732283 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58239207664 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657480314961 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.5427445733 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.9375 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305744901747 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101270899574 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513421199758 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186360098054 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715848900063 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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