All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with these statements and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statements might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Effiecient work requires efficient workers. This goes to show that irrespective of the status of the worker, either as an external consultant or as a company's employee, an effective worker will always carry out duties efficiently.
Some might argue that outside consultants might work better because of several years of experience on the work as well as relevant training. Some might even consider that the employee's could be trained, but that the cost of training employees would be more than that required to involve outside consultants. They fail to recognise that the cost of training their workers, however large, would offset the cost of paying outside employees, and overtime, this would significantly cut the cost of performing certain projects within the company. Also, affording employees with the opportunity to recieve on the job experience as well as conduct jobs independetly, will increase their efficiency. This will in turn save cost incurred in hiring outside consultants, and ultimately increase profits for the companies.
Let's take Nigeria, my home country for example. There is a high level of unemployment in the country and this is not news on a global scale. Several unemployed citizens of the country are skilled labourers who immediately find jobs as they leave the shores of the nation. Yet, you would hardly find a foreign international in Nigeria that is without job. The services of the citizens of a country would provide cheaper labour, and if they are lsitened to, trained, exposed, the services of externals wouldnt be tagged necessary, and more money will be saved.
The above point is the reason why multinational companies in my home country such as Total, Slumberger, Shell Petroleum Development Company (SPDC), etc, proritise sending their workers abroad for adequate training and exposure to reduce the dependence on outside consultants. In these companies, there is a personnel for almost every task, and this increases productivity and reduces costs significantly.
In conclusion,the availability of trained and experienced full time employees would render the services of outside consultants unnecessary and reduce the company's running cost. Therefore, companies should spend more time listening to thier employees and brainstorm ways by which they would recieve pertinent skills and traning enough to handle the affairs the company without the help of external consultants.
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- All too often companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees such consultants would be unnecessary Write a response in which you discuss 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44414893617 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91522240536 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558510638298 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0646341108 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.9375 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292832795122 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837207687177 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781517201152 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160058102371 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102206317694 0.0667264976115 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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