Young people are often influenced by their peers. Do the advantages of peer pressure outweigh the disadvantages?
there is no doubt, nowadays most of the youngsters prefer to spend their times with their close friends. At this point, most of the individuals reckon youngsters prone to change their selves into different person according to their peers. In my point of view, there are a number of advantages than its disadvantages, however we are not recommended to neglect them.
On the one hand, people who support the idea that, youngsters can receive more benefits from peer pressure, usually come up with following ideas and examples. obviously, there will be same interests between youth, due to they influence each other and learn something, so they will not feel bored when they spend their times together. Besides that if they have positive habits or skills that can be useful for others, they will definitely share it with their peers and take advantage from it together, and in a number of cases it can avoid the friendship from being broken, due to they can get on well with each other, as they have similarities on interests.
On the other hand, it can bring few demerits for the youngsters. obviously not everyone is perfect, so there are a number of youngsters, who did not get enough instructions from their parents. if someone has that kind o0f friends their habits are shared with each other, mainly well-behaved person can turn into un-behaved ones. For example, if someone has an ability to learn subjects easily may be, his skills could be loosen due to their peers, they can learn smoking or drinking the alcohols.
In conclusion, after analyzing both sides of the argument now I can say that, the positive aspects of the friend pressure is outweigh from its downsides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...itive aspects of the friend pressure is outweigh from its downsides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8951048951 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54870882424 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8147057846 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.272727273 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139836995559 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510119258935 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261538267215 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792034290141 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249035781276 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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