The graph and table below show the average monthly temperature and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three cities.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The average monthly temperature and gross duration of sunshine in three major cities namely New York, London, and Sydney are demonstrated in the line graph and table.
Regarding the monthly temperature, although the monthly figures of London and New York change considerably with a relatively similar pattern, the weather in New York is more severe, meanwhile, the remained experiences the opposite pattern. Interestingly, the total hours of sunshine in London are the least, meanwhile, figures for Sydney and New York are approximately equal.
It is of note that the monthly temperature in London varies from 10 degrees Celsius in January to a peak of 25 degrees Celsius. Likewise, the winter in New York is 5 degrees Celsius lower than London’s in January, on top of that, the hottest temperature in New York was 30 degrees Celsius in July. In contrast, the average temperature in Sydney bottomed at 15 degrees Celsius in July.
As for sunshine duration, New York and Sydney have relatively similar figures of 2,535 and 2,473 hours respectively. In contrast, the average amount of sunshine on a yearly basis across London stands at a significantly lower level of 1,158 hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, regarding, while, as for, in contrast, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18229166667 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89732706529 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510416666667 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2216308693 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.375 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145053208714 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815605730589 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621605699825 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115509092131 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686410828952 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.