Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Damanding a great attantion to keep and improve the environment , it and its safety is the urgent negotation among the countries throughtout the world. it is considered that government and companies do some tasks , but I argue that individuals contribution is also on the balance scale.
First of all, allocating amount of budget to increasing the environment , government leads to save it friendly. As an example, government allots its roughly 5 % of budget to flourish the nature namely boarden the natural forests and artificial lakes. consequently, it is impossible to create new woods without amount of money.
Furthermore , companies have their role in thriving the nature. Recycling companies are the example of wary of improving the environment which essamble t of garbages that causing the nature being harmfull. As a result, shuch kind of companies can make the natire developed.
However, individuals plays a great role in improving the environment by using public transports. There is no doubt that , we are destroying the nature by using private cars which release posinous fume out. using public transports makes somewhat contribution to flourish the environment .
Moreover, being greener is also the fruction of individuals which keep the nature friendly. For instance, putting litters into the bins which are on the edge of the roads is the best idea of being environmentally-friendly. As a consequent , these actions that done by individuals who are care of environment .
In conclusion, I believed that although government and companies have the major role , but contribution of individuals are also important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42292490119 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29684764774 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557312252964 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6837158603 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.4666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219044957069 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707547413688 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555156142615 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107240142345 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505635003981 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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