Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police force or military force, such as the army , while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this contemporary era, gender inequality is almost vanished in all around the word. Therfore, some people reckon that participation of females in security forces such as police and army is as crucial as men. However, others are opposit to this phenonmenon by holdling the opinion that these occupations are not suitable for womens. This essay sheds light on both perspectives in upcoming paragraphs along with my opinion.
The propotion of the society who is not in the favor of doing jobs by womens, which ensure the securtiy of one particular nation, give there opinion is that womens are not as strong as men. In other words, any scurity force required physical strength in order to catch thiefs and muderes. Shooting is essential part of this job which also demand physical strenth for hold the guns and shoot other person. Furthermore, it is thought by people that main responsibilty of any female is taking care of their of their children and family, whereas in police and army demand 24 hours of duity in oder to ensure the safty of their citizens . Consequently, females try to do two or more things parallely, which puts adverse effect ether on their family or their job.
On the other side those who think that women should participate in defense jobs they give reasons as, all rights must be equally dustributed in both genders. So ,this is the constitutional right of womens to become a part of police or army forces. For example, its mentioned by dr bhim rao ambedekar in the constituion of india that 20 percent of reservation is alloted to womens in these jobs. Secondly, womens also fit and healthy and they also equip with unconditional physical or mental strength. In oder to ensure the physical fitness , more ratio of womens is inclined towrds joining the gymnasim as comapare to past. A study was revealed by department mental strenth in bejing university, China, that females soliders have more tendancy to rectifycomplicated cases than men.
In my opinion, its not fair to allocate job related to police or military force according to gender. These jobs must be given to only suitable candidates. Although , physical strenght is required for these job, other aspects not be overlooked for being a reponsible solider.
To conclude, despite having several controversial statements by narrow minded people for preventing womens out of military and police departements, there is fair amount of masses who support female participation in these departments by giving relevent proofs and statements.
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also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2112.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80342341578 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560096153846 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2725593886 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.157894737 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8947368421 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337533942626 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959167860946 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620028715341 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179413470787 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316719744998 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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