The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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The percentage of people owning three types of electricity powered household equipment which were washing machine, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner is illustrated in the first line graph, while the second chart depicts data of time spent on housework per household in one nation. All the data is given from 1920 to 2019.
It can be seen clearly that the proportion of electrical gadgets witnessed an upward trend, in contrast, the amount of time for doing household chores decreased over the period of time.
With regard to the first chart, the statistic of refrigerator ownership started at 0% in 1920, then increased dramatically to 100% during the next 60 years and leveled out from 1980 to 2019. From 1920 to 1940, the percentage of people having washing machine and vacuum cleaner grew significantly and were equal at 70% in 1960. In the next 10 years, the data of washing machine ownership showed a slight fall then recovered in the next 40 years while that of vacuum cleaner continued its upward trend to 100% in 200 and remained constant in the last 19 years of the period.
Moving on to describe the second line graph, the number of hours spent on doing housework was relatively high at 50. Between 1920 and 1960, a considerable decline of 20 hours was recorded, followed by a minimal decrease to 10 hours in 2019.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, while, in contrast, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59207186727 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4807666439 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.75 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203560482387 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856969831574 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041718220522 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122975746293 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387854251129 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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