Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that the principle purpose of commercial activities is to enhance the sales of undesirable goods. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this statement since the strategy in approaching suitable audience of the company and individuals shopping decision can make the the effort of those assortment that trying to make people buying needless products end up with failure.
To begin with, I would say that advertisement companies have to identify their target audience and constantly promoting their products and so their objects will easily get information what they tend to buy. Moreover, attracting the one needs is also a effective strategy than attempting them randomly. Take a vietnamese clothes brand called CoolMate promoted their new collection aim to student and teacher on Youtube and Facebook and increased its income about threefold compared to other brand.
Furthermore, it is undeniable that customers conciousness has significantly increase due to the presence of deceptive and untruthful advertisements. As a consequence, it create a challenge for those who want to tempt them into unnecessary stuff and advertisements. Especially for shoppers who have limited budgets tend to be more cautious about where provided their desired accessories with affordable price. Since they can look through the review in many network which make untruthful promoting strategy face the risk of losing in revenue.
In conclusion, although the boosting effect of marketing effect of unpreferred products and attracting people is the primary purpose of promotions. I am of the opnion that the advertisement strategy which target specific users is likely more effective and profitable.
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| 2023-06-12 | Charles Le | 89 | view |
| 2023-06-11 | Charles Le | 78 | view |
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| 2023-06-11 | Charles Le | 56 | view |
| 2023-05-31 | Pham Van Nhan | 89 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... individuals shopping decision can make the the effort of those assortment that trying ...
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Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... individuals shopping decision can make the the effort of those assortment that trying ...
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Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this assortment' or 'those assortments'?
Suggestion: this assortment; those assortments
...ing decision can make the the effort of those assortment that trying to make people buying needl...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eover, attracting the one needs is also a effective strategy than attempting them...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
.... Furthermore, it is undeniable that customers conciousness has significantly increase...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...ustomers conciousness has significantly increase due to the presence of deceptive and un...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...ul advertisements. As a consequence, it create a challenge for those who want to tempt...
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Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ired accessories with affordable price. Since they can look through the review in man...
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Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun network seems to be countable; consider using: 'many networks'.
Suggestion: many networks
...nce they can look through the review in many network which make untruthful promoting strateg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60231660232 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09934494508 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633204633205 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5157040969 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.909090909 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106518098195 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336051452731 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328854263024 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624880481791 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361852173565 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.