Some employees think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience when they look for employers.
Discuss both view and give your opinion
In this day and age, it is claimed that educational certificates are becoming more essential features than practical experience and particular characters in terms of seeking for new workers. Overall, this essay will demonstrate some causes for that statement and the writer’s agreement that it is a completely negative development.
As is clearly seen that people obtaining formal qualifications are likely to open the door to better career prospects. The first particular reason for this circumstance is that it is easier to make decisions based on qualifications than the other two figures because it commonly takes much time to illustrate the life experience and personalities. People with educational degrees might be judged as students offering comprehensive education in prestigious universities with a holistic learning environment. It is believed that they do not only acquire theoretical knowledge surely but also participate in extracurricular activities so as to cultivate soft skills. Therefore, it is thought that they might make a contribution to the companies a number of achievements with their academic levels. Secondly, the ones who possess formal qualifications could get better job opportunities because we are living in a knowledge-based society where an increasement in knowledge has a direct relationship with wealth. As they get a quality diploma, they definitely own a chance to apply in an upright company with a high position and salary either.
To my point of view, this transformation has many pessimistic sides. Employees should not only possess various degrees but also practical skills. In addition, life experience assists people to deal with risks more effectively, which provides improvement in working. Personalities also take an significant role in working environment. If they are dishonest or inactive in workplace, it could bring a decreasement in development of the companies.
To some companies in these days, the qualifications seems to be the more essential factor than experience and personal temper.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s a completely negative development. As is clearly seen that people obtaining f...
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Line 3, column 633, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...rticipate in extracurricular activities so as to cultivate soft skills. Therefore, it is...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ent in working. Personalities also take an significant role in working environment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61414790997 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39186385915 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594855305466 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5584459458 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208298921669 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615738506055 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441419282026 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128677129766 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247982832163 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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