Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
there is an increase of people being able to learn and work at home thanks to the development of modern technological gadgets. This writing will demonstrate the writer's point of view that this doing embraces remarkable drawbacks.
On the one hand, learning at home prevents students from interactive learning environment and getting acquainted with new friends. To begin with, students spend huge amount of the time on sitting in front of the screen instead of interacting with class. there are a number of children having a tendency to avoid answering their lecturer's questions and suffer social websites during learning. In addition, people who enroll to unviversities do not have a chance to make new friends with the others. It means that technological gadgets is considered like a barrier in communication skills in classes.
On the other hand, it is believed that learning and working at home could drive people to lose their focus on accomplishing assignment. Firstly, there are a number of children who live in unconditioned family do not have their own learning environment at home. The youth seem not to stay focused on their work also feel bored and stressed when they do not catch up curriculum at school. Secondly, family problems playing a negative role in this statement prevent people who work in an office from acconplishing business. Indeed, both taking care of offspring and doing chores are huge problems that not only desk jobs but also the others embrace when they are not in working environment.
In conclusion, although technology advance are more easily accessible and cheaper, writer is prone to the statement that learning and working at home own more cons than pros.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12949640288 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80923967385 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575539568345 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.0415199577 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.692307692 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218725497952 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742922352673 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514308075272 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14432412007 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449267962137 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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