In some countries, people who are unemployed receive a sum of money.some people think that this money should not be given to people.others , however think it is important to support them financially . discuss both the views and give your opinion
Unemployment is spreading its roots in many countries. In some nations, jobless people are financially endorsed by administration. Some proportion of masses assert that it has some negative outcomes. By contrast, others thik it is the prime responsibility of regime to help them . This essay intendes to account for both sides with my perception.
There are multifarious points to shore up the former view. First and foremost, individuals can become shirkers when they are monetary supported by government. To justify, people may underestimate the importance of work for earning money. What is more, people are not passionate to search for a job as they are financially supported by higher authorities. Therefore, giving monetary helps to unemployed persons have an adverse effect on the progress of a nation. In addition to it ,a nation have to face financial crisis under this approach. To demonstrate,the government already have to spend chunk of money in providing basic amenities to their residents . So, administration's do not have sufficient budget to help the jobless people financially. Needless to say, regime have a huge financial burden if they monetary endorsed the unemployment masses. On the contrary , opposite wind is also there.
Firstly, government can prevent jobless people from doing crime activities . For example,in this era of inflation,the unemployed people are unable to earn their two square meal. Apart from this , they are not able to fulfill their basic needs such as food , shelter and cloth . Furthermore, they are likely to indulge into illegal activities like robbery, murder etc. consequently, it is more productive to give pecuniary support to jobless people.
To recapitulate, undeniably,it can prevent the jobless people from doing crime but we can never underestimate it's drawbacks. According to my prospective, a balanced , logical and regional approach should be taken by the administration while giving the financial endorsement to jobless people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, in addition, such as, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50980392157 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19810559975 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4157791562 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.6363636364 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31818181818 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264520879482 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704679740891 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536805133303 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153873173923 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05017233442 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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