It is better for college students to live far away from home than living at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
There is currently a contentious argument over whether undergraduate students are better to live far away from their hometown than staying at home with their mother and father. Personally, I totally agree with this opinion because living alone not only gives them opportunities to have new experiences but also helps them become more independent.
First and foremost, studying abroad or living in a place far from home can gives students chances to enrich their life experience. Moving to a different place is mean that students have to open up more to adapt to adjustments like make new friends, greet with the neighbourhood, have new relationships. Also, living alone is quite convenient for students as well, because they do not need to ask parents for permission and become more flexible in timing and living conditions. For instance, the result from a national survey in Vietnam showed that 75% of Vietnamese students said that their purpose to study abroad is not only to pursue a better education program but also to gain more chances to learn about other country’s culture and have new experiences.
Another reason why I support the notion that college students should live far away from their homes is living without mom and dad can let them start to live an independent life. Because parents always have a profound impact on their children so when students need to take care of themselves, it can help them to be more responsible with their life. They have to do all the household chores without their parents’ assistant like cleaning the house, mopping the floor or doing the laundry. So enhancing numerous soft skills is a possible consequence.
In conclusion, for the reasons I mentioned above, I strongly believe that there are many benefits that students can gain from living far away from their hometown and their parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
... or living in a place far from home can gives students chances to enrich their life e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03921568627 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68617114125 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9201014515 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.181818182 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470436480768 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180531887315 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129224222281 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304967392706 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037652496203 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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